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What would you do if you could rewrite Bleach?

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Now don't get me wrong I think bleach is an amazing anime who over the years is massively underrated (yeah I said that) but there was some things Kubo could have done better so I'm just going to say what I think on the matter

Agent of the Shinigami arc

Nothing I would really change about this one the thing I would do though is put an extra arc in between this one and SS arc to balance the power ups for Ichigo, so what I thought was make an adchuchas invade the world of the living and Rukia says something among the lines of

"Never have I never met a hollow this powerful before"

And in the end Ichigo almost defeats the adchuchas but it escapes into a garganta only to get executed to maybe Nnoitra while he says idk

"You failed your mission"

But we only see his arm slicing through that adchuchas

Soul Society arc

There is actually nothing I would change about this arc other than the lack of action with Orihime ..... Maybe she could face off against Komamura and somewhat barely win .... Yeah Orihime FTW also instead of putting Soi-Fons idiot lieutenant here I would replace him with an awesome lieutenant one so awesome that she has a bankai nobody knows about XD

Arrancar arc

I would change Toshiro's fight with Luppi ..... I would make Orihime come to the rescue after Urahara and basically blast Luppi to bits also Toshiro wouldn't use his shikai against Luppi and would have the seal on him same with Renji and Matsumoto and the others also there would be some major training for Rukia, Renji and Ishida!

Orihime would start getting weird dreams about Ichigo's body dead and her will would slowly wither away making her weaker

Hueco mundo arc

Instead of making there be 10 espada I would have 7 you know, how it was SUPPOSED to be

Ulquiorra

Szayel

Nnoitra

Cirucci

Grimmjow

Starrk


OC (same plot with AAroniero only she is more awesome has a better character design and a more cool power)

Yeah only the cool ones would be here :lala

As for the rankings

1. Starrk

2. Ulquiorra

3. Nnoitra (after all he went though, he deserves it)

4. Grimmjow

5. Szayel

6. Cirucci

7. OC (might as well name her Conchita xD)

Uhhhh I would cut Gantanbainne out, didn't really like him

Oh NO bankai spamming and Rukia would one shot the sand man when they first meet

Fights

Nnoitra VS Kenpachi

Ulquiorra VS Ichigo

Grimmjow VS Ichigo

Chad VS OC (manages to wound her but loses in the end)

Rukia VS OC (she wins, same scenario of what happened with Kaien, the OC transforms into Kaien)

Renji VS Szayel (he loses but not to the point where people call him weak)

Mayuri VS Szayel

Cirucci VS Ishida (it would be a lot more Interesting though)

Fake Karakura town arc

I would make plot more understandable and not put ALL the lieutenants there instead I would only add

Kira
Shuhei
Sasikibe (and actually give him a FIGHT)
Rangiku (since she's really important)
Yumichika
Ikkaku

Byakuya and Toshiro would help fight Starrk

Make the new and improved lieutenant if the 2nd squad get a backstory and die against Ggio

Make Shinji fight Gin before Aizen

And instead of Aizen simply overpowering the captains he uses his zanpackuto to his advantage and make Urahara have some device to get some Kido on Aizen not make Aizen say his power is to great for anyone to harm him

Make the Aizen VS Ichigo fight longer and less one sided- I loved this fight but I think it should have been longer and not make Ichigo completely obliterate Aizen I liked it but it was WAY to one sided

lost shinigami arc

Instead of making Ichigo just gain his fullbring powers only to lose them I would make Chad and Orihime go completely go berserk and have all those fights with Tskishima that they promised in the opening oh I would also make Ginjou more well written instead of having such little screen time

vandenreich arc

I wouldn't change nothing about this one .... NOTHIN it's too perfect :aha


So how would you change Bleach and what do you think of my way, was it bad? :wah was it good? :lala
Or was it completely awesome? :sheep
 
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Only thing i would change about bleach is Rukia &Uryuu. I'd make him more like Vegeta as far as power concern. Just as powerful as ichigo,but not quite. Rukia ,i'd give her more battles,and she'd win more of them. Oh ,Bya&Ichi as well ! imo they spam their bankai way too much ! U know what? i just wanna see more zanjutsu in bleach in general ,theyre all samurai for cryin out loud . But bleach is perfect to me ,i honesty dont know why so many ppl think its pacing and writing so bad ,its like soap opera. (sorry off topic)
 
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I just want to say I would only change some minor things, as someone who loves to write, I cannot justly criticize someone is a genius in writing such an interesting and thought provoking Manga. So what would I change only minor, but some characters would have to go.

Agent of the Shinigami Arc


I would keep this the same, but since we don't have a good background on Rukia besides the obvious one, I would go into a little more in-depth detail of her background.

Sou Society Arc

I wouldn't change a thing.

Arrancar Arc

I do not like the way Ichigo treated Tatsku when she only asked a question-this I would change.

HM ARC/DECIDE


I would have explored Ulquiorra realization of the HEART more

Lost Shinigami Arc

Didn't really like this arc, but I guess it had a purpose, but I would have provided a deeper in -depth story of Ginjou, I would have explained why Ikuma stopped Ginjou from talking (I am hoping that Kubo will elaborate more on this).

The Final Arc

I am loving this Arc....
 
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i would have had Aizen take Momo with him when he betrayed SS,i would have had Ulquiorra survive and be with Orihime.i would have Gin survive the war with Aizen and have his captain status restored
and in the current arc i would have had Jushiro suceeed Yama as CC instead of Shunsui
alao the espada ranks would be thus.........
Primera: Ulquiorra
Segunda: Szayelaporro
Trecera: Neliel
Quarta: Harribel
quinta: Nnoitra
Sexta: Grimmjow
Seventh:Tesra
Octava: Starrk
Novena: Barragan
Tenth: Luppi
 
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Only a very small part of it really, for me the rest is pretty much fine. I'd only rewrite the "lifespan" of Grimmjow's fraccion, basically they escaped the attack at the very last second from the shinigamis and died in FKT arc. I'd like to see their reaction when they see Grimmjow defeated by Ichigo. Oh, and Yylfordt can finally speak to his brother on-screen >w<
 

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Goofy note, the Masaki scene? More of those. Serious Note, if I would advertise that there are squads of 13 captains that know bankai, I would show them a bit earlier in the series.
 
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Agent of the Shinigami Arc

I would give Sado and Orihime more battles against the Hollows.

Soul Society Arc

Have Orihime and Sado fight Vice-Captains.
Orihime vs Isane
Sado vs Omeda or Iba

Arrancar Arc

Make Grand Fisher a proper Arrancar and not a Psuedo-Arrancar.
Let Sado fight someone, maybe when Yammy, Luppi etc... come to the Human World, maybe another Arrancar comes (Yammy fraccion?) for him to fight.

Hueco Mundo Arc

Have Rukia and Renji fight Privaron Espada before fighting Espada.
Make Zommari less arrogant and more malicious, maybe having Byakuya cut off his own hand or arm?

FKT Arc

Have Sasakibe fight someone strong. Fighting Ayon would be awesome.
Omaeda proving to be a better badass than he did. (He proved he was not as useless as people thought, make it better and have him slaughter Nirgge.)
Let Iba fight someone.
Give Momo a confrontation with Aizen, not a fight, but an argument or something.
Let Gin and Shinji fight each other!
Make the Hitsugaya and Harribel fight more intense.
Let Shunsui go Bankai so Starrk can fight someone with Bankai like he wanted.

Fullbringer Arc

Only thing I'd change here is make it more interesting. I liked the arc, but I lost interest often, but it was by no means a bad arc imo.

1000 Year Blood War Arc

Have Rojuro kill Nanana.
 

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If I could rewrite Bleach,

If I could rewrite Bleach,

The matches between Gotei 13 and Visored against Sosuke Aizen and his Espada army will be:

Fake Karakura Town:
- Coyote Starrk and Lilynette Gingerbuck vs. Shunsui Kyoraku, Rojuro Otoribashi and Love Aikawa (with Jushiro Ukitake in near-death leaving Shunsui to unleash his Bankai; Coyote deceased)
- Barragan Louisenbairn vs. Sui Feng and Hachigen Ushoda (with Marechiyo Omaeda foolishly dying and Barragan rotting)
- Tier Harribel vs. Toshiro Hitsugaya and Hiyori Sarugaki (ending in draw)
- Wonderweiss Margela vs. Mashiro Kuna, Jinta Hanakari and Ururu Tsumugiya (with Wonderweiss completely annihilated)

Hueco Mundo:
- Yammy Llargo vs. Byakuya Kuchiki and Kenpachi Zaraki (ending in Yammy deceased)
- Ulquiorra Cifer vs. Ichigo Kurosaki (with Ulquiorra dying in Ichigo’s Full Hollow Form)
- Nnoitra Gilga vs. Kenpachi Zaraki (easy win on Kenpachi’s side)
- Grimmjow Jaegerjacques vs. Ichigo Kurosaki (with Grimmjow losing and in near-death)
- Zommari Rureaux vs. Byakuya Kuchiki (easy win on Byakuya’s side)
- Szayel Aporro Granz vs. Mayuri Kurotsuchi (with Szayel dying in comatose due to superhuman drug)
- Aaroniero Arruruerie vs. Rukia Kuchiki (leaving Aaroniero dying and Rukia in near-death)

With this matches done, the matches between the three traitors will be:

- Kaname Tosen vs. Sajin Komamura, Kensei Muguruma and Shuhei Hisagi (with Kaname unleashing his Bankai and Resurreccion, but losing and dying to Shuhei’s Bankai)
- Gin Ichimaru vs. Rangiku Matsumoto and Izuru Kira (with Izuru deceased)
- Sosuke Aizen vs. Shinji Hirako (ending in Shinji in near-death and Aizen transforming into his first Hogyoku’d form)
- Sosuke Aizen [1st Hogyoku form] vs. Yoruichi Shihoin, Isshin Kurosaki/Shiba, Kisuke Urahara and Tessai Tsukabishi (leaving the quartet in near-deaths; and Aizen transforming into his second Hogyoku’d form)

With this matches done, Sosuke and Gin went to Karakura Town, which is in Soul Society, and there, create the Oken.

- Revenge revealed: Sosuke Aizen [2nd Hogyoku form] vs. Gin Ichimaru (with Gin dying)
- Sosuke Aizen [2nd Hogyoku’d form] vs. Ichigo Kurosaki (with Ichigo unleashing his Full Hollow Form in Bankai, and Ichigo in near-death)

After his bout with Ichigo’s Full Hollow Form, Aizen transports to the Royal Palace to conquer it, prompting the reveal of the Squad Zero, the Royal Family’s Secret Service. Meanwhile, Retsu Unohana, after healing Ichigo Kurosaki, revealed her true form being the First Kenpachi, Yachiru Unohana. Her, together with Shigekuni Yamamoto, transports to the Royal Palace to meet with the Soul King and convinced him/it to escape, knowing that the Final Battle against Aizen will be held in the palace.

Then, Shigekuni and Yachiru were reunited to the rest of the First-Generation Gotei 13 and battle against Aizen.

- Sosuke Aizen [2nd Hogyoku Form] vs. The First-Generation Gotei 13 [Shigekuni Yamamoto, Yachiru Unohana] (leaving both parties in near-death, however the Hogyoku finally materializes Aizen’s wish and become transcendental. Aizen transforms into a being equal to the Soul King.)

Ichigo, meanwhile, transports to the Royal Palace through Kukaku Shiba’s canon and while in the way, he went into Jinzen and there, encountered Soul King, revealing that he is the vessel that will defeat the other Soul King (which is Aizen). Ichigo, transforms into the vessel of the Soul King and battle Aizen.

- Sosuke Aizen [an entity equal to Soul King] vs. Ichigo Kurosaki [Soul King’s vessel] (with Ichigo totally defeating and killing Aizen and the Hogyoku)

Aftermath: Ichigo loses his Shinigami-Hollow powers and became a Human, for life. (This prompts that the Fullbringer arc will be unnecessary because Fullbring powers are brought about by Hollow inside Ichigo. However, the Soul King knows that his archenemy, the sealed Quincy King awakens and he gave Ichigo a mission to awaken his powers again by knowing his true heritage, thus the Millennium Blood War arc still stands.)
 

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After Aizen's defeat, I'd put a disclaimer as the author, something like this: The following new arcs, WILL NOT FEATURE THIS CHARACTER RETURNING AS THE MAIN VILLAIN ANYMORE! IF HE RETURNS, IT WILL BE FOR FLASHBACKS AND FORESHADOWING FUTURE EVENTS, SO STOP MAKING HIM THE MAIN REASON FOR EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENS IN THIS SERIES! HE'S NOT THE AUTHOR, I AM!, thank you for your support^^.
 
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