Spot on although i may adjust giselle there. I personally could have done without all that silly nonsense but its just my opinion-Honestly id replace Luders entirely with Haschwalth, give him abit more of a bigger role right away. Luders was unnecessary. And make Ebern talk shit to Haschwalth which causes Yhwach to kill him.
-Fleshing out the First Invasion battles;
-Cang Du VS Hitsugaya I
-BG9 VS Soifon I
-Bambietta VS Komamura I
-Nanana VS Rose
-Driscoll VS Hisagi
-Askin VS Ukitake
-maybe see a bit more Accutrone vs Shunsui too
Shinji VS Bazz-B; make that happen so when they encounter each other later it adds more substance.
-Kensei VS whoever; maybe Nianzol? would be funny to see him bitch about fighting weird kids with strong powers.
-Giselle, Pepe, and Shaz VS the SRDI. Maybe Mayuri can engage one of them briefly and he can bring it up when he encounters them 2 later.
-Whoever fought Rukia. Thinking it might have been a FemRitter.
-Give the Femritters a fight too.
-Have the SS show up, but hide their appearances/powers. Just so they arent so last minute and unexpected in the RR later. Maybe have Yhwach call them after he kills Yama; originally they were going to wait for the RG to sow up after they fucked up Soul Society, so it would make sense for him to call them. But obviously they won't fight as Yhwach is forced back into his base.
-Show more Sternritter interactions in the base. Maybe have them subtly foreshadow their powers or something. Including showing Shaz too.
-give BG9 and Cang Du longer battles
--Give us K's power
-Animate the Shaz/Kira part from 13 Blades. Maybe a flashback for some of Shaz's origins.
-have Nanana fight Renji
-not offpanel Nanana, Candice, and Accutrone.
--Give us N's power
-Give Liltotto and Meninas actual fights.
-Shinji VS Bazz-B a decent length fight.
-Show us the rest of the RG VS SS fights.
-add longer to the base Lille VS Shunsui part.
-show us Askin VS Ichigo
-show more base Gerard VS Gotei 13.
That would be really cool. If only we did see it.It would be nice to see glimpses of all Sternritter during the 1st invasion.
Some possible fights from Jerome, Berenice, Loyd and Domino.
the first 3 could be fighting against some Division 11 Shinigami like Yachiru, Ikkaku and Yumichika. Domino could have his Novel appear to see more of him.
It would be also nice to see Bambietta using Komamura's Bankai.
And they can lengthen the final fights to see Bankai Love and Lisa against Gerard and possibly Isshin Aizen, Yoruichi, Tessai and Ukitake Bankai being smuggled somehow would be plain .